#384:科技使生活简单还是复杂

Some people believe that developments of technology are making life more complex and the solution for everybody is to accept a simpler life without using technologies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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It is sometimes advised that people in today’s world should stop using technologies which have increased complexity of their lives. I do not agree with this idea.

 

A 科技 B尽量减少人类参与某些工作 C 生活简单

背景:科技的发展是基于节省时间,提高效率,降低成本

解释:不用去做耗时的、耗费体力的、重复性的工作

举例:比如扫地机器人、智能电饭锅

举例:自动化,人工智能

扣题:在这方面,技术不是一个问题,而是一个解决方案。

My view can be supported by the fact that technology has made modern life less complex by reducing people’s involvement in some trival and repetitive work. Innovators have developed different cutting-edge tools, equipment and systems to achieve this purpose with the aim of saving time, improving efficiency and cutting costs. These kinds of technological progress have liberated individuals from time-consuming, arduous and tedious tasks or chores. For instance, robotic cleaners and smart rice cookers can clean the house and prepare a meal without the assistance of owners while automation and artificial intelligence have eliminated the need for human labour in production work, collecting data and conducting calculations. In this regard, technology allows people to handle the demands of their lives, rather than complicates every aspect of lives.

 

科技角度:A科技满足很多的功能 B 提高我们的生活 C 哪怕是复杂,我们也不能够不用

背景:商家为了挣钱,发明很多科技去满足人们的一些需求,解决一些问题

解释:提高生活水准,包括健康等,很难不用

举例:手机各种APP让我们生活复杂,譬如说朋友圈,新闻,网购,但是让沟通、了解信息和购物更加方便

举例:各种厨房用具和电器让做饭复杂,但是我们不需要学习做饭的技能

 

Even though some technologies have made lives less simple, people cannot live without these innovations, given the impact on their well-being. Numerous hi-tech products have been invented to satisfy the needs of users and solve problems, so inventors can earn a fortune. These technological improvements are indispensable as they are integral to a decent quality of life. Mobile phone apps, for instance, add some extra tasks to our lives, such as checking social networking accounts, reading news and shopping before bedtime, but these developments are irreplaceable in communication, knowledge-acquisition and buying what we need. Another example is the use of state-of-the-art kitchenware and household appliances, which have complicated food-preparation, but these technological changes are favoured by people who have no interest in learning cooking skills.

 

In conclusion, I do not think it is sensible or possible to prevent the use of modern technology. Technology has simplified our lives in some cases, and in others, it is intertwined with many aspects of our lives, despite its complexity.

 


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学生的观点

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A.不使用科技的简单生活B.医疗方面技术的落后C.疾病无法控制

医疗是个例子,而且疾病控制和生活是否简单没联系,跑题。

A 电子产品让生活更复杂 B不愿意学习新生产的电子产品 C放弃使用电子产品

这是一个例子,不够有概括性。

A科技的使用方法复杂 B在使用科技前还需要学习如何使用 C不使用科技

很多东西都要学,要学习不代表没必要。

a不使用科技产品b出行方式等不用做太多选择c生活简单

这是一个例子,不够有概括性。

A 不同意 科技让人们工作更简单 B 使用科技人们工作效率更高 C 社会经济发展更快

这个题目不讨论科技的好处。

A 科技发展过快 B 很多产品开始收取额外的费用才能够使用 C 科技导致生活变得复杂

费用和复杂不是一个概念。

A:不用技术过 B:无法使用汽车、手机和网络等技术产物 C:带来诸多不便,生活可能比原本还更complex

不要用反证。

A每个人都不用科技 B 影响生活质量C 生活缺乏乐趣

题目只关心是否简单还是复杂,不需要讨论乐趣


开头段替换词

Developments of technology: technological changes, technological innovations, new technology

Make life more complex: make life inconvenient, increase complexity of life, make life sophisticated

Everybody: all people, every person

Accept a simpler life: live a simple life


开头段范例

Today, we live in a world where we rely on technology in many aspects of our lives. In most cases, technology has made our lives easier and happier, although sometimes it is a nuisance.


主体段一

A 高科技产品的开发 B 促进生产者的商业利益 C 使生活变得不必要的复杂。

背景:设计师们分析了人们生活的方方面面,提出了克服一些不便的技术方法。解释:这些技术的好处确实微不足道,有时人们需要更多的时间来利用这些创新。

举例:一些厨房用具的目的是加速一些任务,如削水果皮和做寿司,但人们花了很长时间学习如何使用和清洁这些工具。


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主体段二

A一些技术  B 让我们更加忙碌,给我们带来额外的压力 C 减少对这些技术的依赖,让我们过上更简单的生活。

背景:我们生活在数字时代,新的通信技术从根本上改变了我们的工作和通信方式。

解释:乍一看,所有这些技术都能让我们轻松地与他人保持联系,并处理一些重复性的任务,但实际上,由于技术的变化,我们的生活速度更快。

举例:即使在家,我们也能与同事和客户联系,工作和个人生活之间的界限也不太清楚。

举例2:当电话和电脑随时可用时,我们的信息也超载了。

扣题:从我们的生活中删除这些信息可以减少焦虑,提高满意度。


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主体段三

A 科技 B尽量减少人类参与某些工作 C 生活简单

背景:手工做一些日常工作很复杂,需要训练和练习。

解释:技术进步可以通过自动化和机械化把人们从这些耗时的工作中解放出来。举例:可以自动完成一些家务的家用设备,如智能电饭煲和其他可以按预定时间准备饭菜的厨房设备。

举例:与工作相关的技术,如复印机和计算机,已经允许人们在这些工作过去花费的一小部分时间内处理、分类和存储文档。

扣题:在这方面,技术不是一个问题,而是一个解决方案。


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结尾段

In conclusion, while I agree that technology has brought tremendous convenience to us, some technological innovations have delivered opposite outcomes.


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