#72:在家出外都没有安全感

Many people nowadays do not feel safe either when they are at home or when they go out. What reasons for this change and what to do to solve this problem?
主体段三(其他解决方法)

A 政府注意扶贫 B 解决基本生活问题 C犯罪率下降

A 政府注意提升法律 B 减少犯罪率 C恢复人们信心



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The sense of safety is absent in communities, and people are fearful of crime wherever they go. There are two factors contributing to this problem and it is necessary to take action to reverse this trend.


A 经济不好 B  犯罪率上升 C 人们对自身安全不放心

解释(A-B):贫穷,犯罪增加

举例:社区盗窃、抢劫、绑架、入室盗窃

举例:网络犯罪

One possible explanation is that economic recession has led to a higher crime rate. Some people may lose jobs and live in poverty for a prolonged period of time, thereby turning to crime to make a living. Thefts, robberies, kidnappings and burglaries have increased dramatically, and many law-abiding citizens live in fear. Even surfing the Internet at home is no longer safe, as cyber crime surges and people can lose money when their personal information is stolen.


A 犯罪的报道很多 B 人们对社区不放心 C 去哪里都担心

背景:媒体发一些恐怖的图片,夸大一些情节,去吸引眼球

背景2:媒体很少公布具体的犯罪数字,人们以为犯罪很普遍

Another reason is that the extensive coverage of crime in the media has fueled the fear of crime in communities. News outlets present some disturbing pictures of crime and dramatise some high-profile criminal offences in order to increase ratings. Meanwhile, news media hardly provide detailed crime statistics, and the public may assume that crime is widespread. This is why most of them are fearful of rising crime.


A 政府注意扶贫 B 解决基本生活问题 C犯罪率下降

解释(B-C):满意度提高,生活感恩

A 对媒体监控 B犯罪的报道不能过度 C 减少不必要的恐慌

解释(B-C):报道犯罪,也要报道社区在打击犯罪上的进步

Poverty reduction, cover basic survival needs, reduce crime

A sense of satisfaction, feel grateful

Regulate news media, undue coverage, the spread of fear

Progress/ strides are make

To reassure the public that their communities are safe to live, the government should pay attention to both welfare services and regulation. By providing the unemployed and other disadvantaged people with a safety net, the government can ensure that people can maintain a basic standard of living. Poverty-related crime will be reduced if the disadvantaged do not have financial worries. Media censorship is also an essential part of preventing the spread of fear in communities. News organisations are required to give the public a clear picture of whether crime is an isolated event or a clear trend. This will reduce the risk that the public may have mistaken ideas about the dangers in communities.  


To sum up, the media as well as poverty are to blame for the fear of crime in society. To help the public regain the sense of safety, the government should address both issues.


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物业管理薄弱和房子建筑构造不合理   B.地震,火灾,小偷   C.人们在家感到不安全

不够合理。火灾和地震都是小概率事件,不至于让人们觉得不安全。

A   社区派人平复居民不安B降低人们对罪犯的害怕C人们恢复对家、外面安全感

比较牵强。派人平复不安? 怎么做到?

A   物价上升   B 大多数人们没有多余的收入   C 导致担心

往往是担心一些不可控的时事件突然发生 ,而物价上升都是持续的事情,也是正在发生的,不可能会导致你“do   not feel safe”

A人们缺乏自卫知识 B对险境感到无助 C 在家和出门都觉得不安全

这个不合理。光有知识是不够的,关键还是社区是否能够消除风险,保护民众。


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In some countries, people do not have a sense of safety. In my opion, some policies must be enforced to solve this problem.


The sense of security is absent in communities, and a growing number of people feel they are facing numerous risks. It is imperative that the government can identify and tackle the underlying causes of these negative emotions.  


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In conclusion, economic upheavals and technological changes are possibly the reasons why people are scared even when at home. Combating crime can help alleciate this kind of fear.


主体段一

犯罪率上升  B 人们很容易成为受害人  C 没有安全感

背景:经济形势不好,一些人为了基本的生活需求去犯罪

解释(A-B):抢劫,入室盗窃,诈骗

解释(B-C):媒体播放比较多,政府法律不够严厉


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主体段二

A 媒体科技不断发展 B 网络监控和视频监控增加  C 没有安全感

背景:政府希望通过监控来发现和捕捉罪犯,人们觉得这些科技有震慑力

解释(A-B):大数据,面部识别等等, 让监控成为了可能

解释(B-C):数据会落入一些坏人的手里, 成为一些诈骗的受害人

担心自己的隐私被侵犯,觉得自己个人信息会被泄露,病历,政治立场等等。。。


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主体段三(解决方法)

政府采取措施  B 打击犯罪  C恢复信心

解释:政府可以行使其立法权,通过严厉的法律,施加严厉的惩罚,从而阻止犯罪

解释2:它还应增加在线监控方面的支出,并升级网络安全,以确保任何侵入系统的黑客都能被立即发现和抓获

解释3:如果罪犯服刑较长时间,他们会仔细权衡违法的利弊

解释(B-C): 了解这些措施的公民将重新获得安全感


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主体段二(其他原因)

A 网络安全 B 个人信息泄漏,造成损失 C 没有安全感


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